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Clearly show how each point relates to your main point about the topic.","owner":1046173113,"hidden":0,"id":8813653},{"description":"Make sure your claim includes how you will use examples to address all parts of the prompt question. Your introduction should give a clear direction for your analysis.","removable_sets":[3495070],"locked_sets":[],"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Develop claim","owner":1046173113,"hidden":0,"id":8813640},{"removable_sets":[3495070],"locked_sets":[],"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Develop idea","description":"Slow down and develop this idea fully before making a clear transition to the next. An analysis essay should complete its discussion of one specific point before moving on to the next.","owner":1046173113,"id":8813670,"hidden":0},{"owner":1046173113,"hidden":0,"id":8813652,"description":"Focus on this example and tell your readers why it was used. An analysis essay should focus on the purpose and strategies of the source, not just what it says.","removable_sets":[3495070],"locked_sets":[],"symbol":"Explain further","can_remove":1},{"description":"The topic sentence of each body paragraph should connect to your claim about the topic. Help your readers see the connection between this idea and your claim with a clear topic sentence.","can_remove":1,"symbol":"Include topic sentence","locked_sets":[],"removable_sets":[3495070],"id":8813674,"hidden":0,"owner":1046173113},{"hidden":0,"id":8813702,"owner":1046173113,"description":"Integrate this quoted evidence with your own ideas so the sentence flows seamlessly. Evidence that is quoted from the source(s) should read as a coherent part of the sentence as a whole.","symbol":"Integrate quote","locked_sets":[],"can_remove":1,"removable_sets":[3495070]},{"owner":1046173113,"hidden":0,"id":8813691,"removable_sets":[3495070],"symbol":"Maintain formal language","locked_sets":[],"can_remove":1,"description":"It's important to speak to your audience in a formal manner. This means using academic language to discuss your ideas in an advanced way. Revise your sentences to be more formal."},{"owner":1046173113,"id":8813697,"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3495070],"symbol":"Maintain objective tone","can_remove":1,"locked_sets":[],"description":"Your use of language here helps to build a formal style for your essay. Be sure to maintain this style by phrasing your ideas in an academic, unbiased, and objective way."},{"removable_sets":[3495070],"locked_sets":[],"symbol":"Move beyond a summary","can_remove":1,"description":"Go beyond simply summarizing the source(s) in this section. Your essay should help readers understand the purpose and strategies of the source(s).","owner":1046173113,"id":8813663,"hidden":0},{"owner":1046173113,"id":8813661,"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3495070],"symbol":"Preview topic","can_remove":1,"locked_sets":[],"description":"Does this sentence preview the points or topic you plan to discuss? The beginning of each paragraph should show your readers the direction your analysis will take. Consider this for each paragraph in your essay."},{"owner":1046173113,"id":8813642,"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3495070],"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Provide context","locked_sets":[],"description":"You are building towards a meaningful and specific claim. Be sure to engage your readers with sufficient context of the topic and source(s)."},{"owner":1046173113,"hidden":0,"id":8813696,"removable_sets":[3495070],"symbol":"Rephrase idea","locked_sets":[],"can_remove":1,"description":"This sentence might be difficult for your readers to understand. Reread this section and rephrase your ideas so they are clear to your audience."},{"removable_sets":[3495070],"symbol":"Restate claim","can_remove":1,"locked_sets":[],"description":"Paraphrase your main points and leave your readers with something to think about. Remember, your claim should be present in your conclusion but not identical to how it was phrased in your introduction.","owner":1046173113,"hidden":0,"id":8813656},{"owner":1046173113,"id":8813684,"hidden":0,"description":"Revise this sentence so it effectively concludes this paragraph. The last sentence of each paragraph should finalize the points that were discussed in that paragraph.","removable_sets":[3495070],"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Revise last sentence","locked_sets":[]},{"owner":1046173113,"id":8813639,"hidden":0,"description":"Your introduction should present the topic of the source(s) to be analyzed and a clear claim. Give a brief introduction to the source(s), then clearly restate the prompt question as the claim of your essay.","removable_sets":[3495070],"locked_sets":[],"can_remove":1,"symbol":"State claim"},{"description":"Strengthen this example. Look for more appropriate evidence to include, and then clearly explain why it supports your claim.","symbol":"Strengthen example","can_remove":1,"locked_sets":[],"removable_sets":[3495070],"id":8813658,"hidden":0,"owner":1046173113},{"id":8813693,"hidden":0,"owner":1046173113,"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Strong language","locked_sets":[],"removable_sets":[3495070],"description":"The writing in this section is strong. Review other sentences in your essay to ensure you've maintained a formal style and an objective tone throughout."},{"symbol":"Strong progress of ideas","can_remove":1,"locked_sets":[],"removable_sets":[3495070],"description":"These ideas are starting to link together nicely. Look for other areas of your essay where evidence from the source(s) could be improved to help prove each point.","id":8813682,"hidden":0,"owner":1046173113},{"owner":1046173113,"id":8813662,"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3495070],"locked_sets":[],"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Strong support","description":"The support you've provided here is strong. Look for other areas of your essay that could use stronger support."},{"removable_sets":[3495070],"locked_sets":[],"symbol":"Strong tie to claim","can_remove":1,"description":"This part shows a stronger relationship to your claim. Maintain focus on the purpose of your essay throughout your writing.","owner":1046173113,"id":8813648,"hidden":0},{"description":"Include an example that best supports this point. Each idea needs to relate to your claim and be supported with an example from the source(s).","removable_sets":[3495070],"locked_sets":[],"symbol":"Support with example","can_remove":1,"owner":1046173113,"hidden":0,"id":8813657},{"description":"Help your readers follow your ideas. Use descriptive sentence starters (like \"One way the author _____\" or \"The author shows ____ when\") to improve the flow of your essay.","can_remove":1,"symbol":"Use sentence starter","locked_sets":[],"removable_sets":[3495070],"hidden":0,"id":8813675,"owner":1046173113},{"hidden":0,"id":8813692,"owner":1046173113,"description":"Look at the length of your sentences in this section. Are they all very short or very long? Revise this sentence to be make sure you have both complex and simple sentence structures.","can_remove":1,"locked_sets":[],"symbol":"Vary sentence structures","removable_sets":[3495070]},{"hidden":0,"id":8813700,"owner":1046173113,"locked_sets":[],"can_remove":1,"symbol":"Vary vocabulary","removable_sets":[3495070],"description":"Use a stronger verb, phrase, or transition to explain your evidence. Common phrases (like \"The text says\" or \"For example\") are helpful, but try to introduce evidence in different ways each time."}]}