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Your readers need you to explain what these examples show and why the author included them.","removable_sets":[3495510],"symbol":"Explain examples","id":8827622},{"id":8827595,"symbol":"Explain further","description":"Focus on this example and tell your readers why it was used. An analysis essay should focus on the purpose and strategies of the source, not just what it says.","removable_sets":[3495510],"can_remove":1,"owner":1046173113,"locked_sets":[],"hidden":0},{"can_remove":1,"description":"Include a topic sentence that previews the point you will discuss. Your readers should be able to clearly connect the purpose of each paragraph back to your claim.","removable_sets":[3495510],"hidden":0,"locked_sets":[],"owner":1046173113,"symbol":"Include topic sentence","id":8827627},{"locked_sets":[],"owner":1046173113,"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3495510],"description":"Evidence that is quoted from the source should read like a natural part of the sentence as a whole. Try reading your sentence aloud to make sure the sentence has flow and your ideas are clear.","can_remove":1,"symbol":"Integrate quote","id":8827643},{"symbol":"Maintain formal language","id":8827631,"hidden":0,"locked_sets":[],"owner":1046173113,"can_remove":1,"removable_sets":[3495510],"description":"Revise this and other sentences so that you are writing in a more serious manner, rather than the way you might talk to your friends. When writing an essay, you must speak to your readers in a formal way."},{"removable_sets":[3495510],"description":"Make sure you have stated this idea in an objective way. In an analysis essay, you are not trying to persuade the readers to agree with you. Instead, you are presenting evidence to support your claim.","can_remove":1,"locked_sets":[],"owner":1046173113,"hidden":0,"symbol":"Maintain objective tone","id":8827639},{"hidden":0,"owner":1046173113,"locked_sets":[],"can_remove":1,"removable_sets":[3495510],"description":"Does this sentence preview the points or topic you plan to discuss? The beginning of each paragraph should show your readers the direction your analysis will take. Consider this for each paragraph in your essay.","id":8827608,"symbol":"Preview topic"},{"id":8827588,"symbol":"Provide background","hidden":0,"owner":1046173113,"locked_sets":[],"can_remove":1,"removable_sets":[3495510],"description":"You are building towards a meaningful and specific claim. Be sure to engage your readers with sufficient context of the topic and source(s)."},{"id":8827638,"symbol":"Rephrase idea","owner":1046173113,"locked_sets":[],"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3495510],"description":"This sentence might be difficult for your readers to understand. Reread this section and rephrase your ideas so they are clear to your audience.","can_remove":1},{"can_remove":1,"removable_sets":[3495510],"description":"Reconsider the phrasing and presentation of these ideas, and be sure you have addressed all parts of the prompt question. A good conclusion restates the claim in a more sophisticated way.","hidden":0,"locked_sets":[],"owner":1046173113,"symbol":"Restate claim","id":8827601},{"id":8827630,"symbol":"Revise last sentence","can_remove":1,"description":"Revise this sentence so it effectively concludes this paragraph. The last sentence of each paragraph should finalize the points that were discussed in that paragraph.","removable_sets":[3495510],"hidden":0,"owner":1046173113,"locked_sets":[]},{"owner":1046173113,"locked_sets":[],"hidden":0,"description":"Take a look at the last part of your introduction. What question did the prompt ask you to answer? End your introduction with a brief statement that answers the task.","removable_sets":[3495510],"can_remove":1,"id":8827581,"symbol":"State claim"},{"can_remove":1,"removable_sets":[3495510],"description":"Strengthen this example. Look for more appropriate evidence to include, and then clearly explain why it shows supports your claim.","hidden":0,"owner":1046173113,"locked_sets":[],"id":8827606,"symbol":"Strengthen example"},{"removable_sets":[3495510],"description":"This is a strong way to start a new paragraph. Look for other parts of your essay that could benefit from a similar approach to your paragraphs.","can_remove":1,"owner":1046173113,"locked_sets":[],"hidden":0,"id":8827629,"symbol":"Strong beginning"},{"symbol":"Strong claim","id":8827589,"description":"This part shows a stronger relationship to your claim. Maintain focus on the purpose of your prompt throughout your writing.","removable_sets":[3495510],"can_remove":1,"locked_sets":[],"owner":1046173113,"hidden":0},{"id":8827636,"symbol":"Strong language","owner":1046173113,"locked_sets":[],"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3495510],"description":"You have presented your ideas in a factual way and without emotion. Strong analysis essays maintain a formal style and an objective tone throughout.","can_remove":1},{"locked_sets":[],"owner":1046173113,"hidden":0,"removable_sets":[3495510],"description":"The support in this section of your writing is strong. Be sure you've selected high-quality evidence and thoroughly explained the connection to your claim throughout the rest of your essay, too.","can_remove":1,"symbol":"Strong support","id":8827610},{"id":8827603,"symbol":"Support with example","can_remove":1,"description":"Include an example that best supports this point. Each idea needs to relate to your claim and be supported with an example from the source(s).","removable_sets":[3495510],"hidden":0,"owner":1046173113,"locked_sets":[]},{"hidden":0,"locked_sets":[],"owner":1046173113,"can_remove":1,"removable_sets":[3495510],"description":"Help your readers follow your ideas. Use descriptive sentence starters (like \"One way the author _____\" or \"The author shows ____ when\") to improve the flow of your essay.","symbol":"Use sentence starter","id":8827628},{"owner":1046173113,"locked_sets":[],"hidden":0,"description":"Look at the length of your sentences in this section. Are they all very short or very long? Revise this sentence to be make sure you have both complex and simple sentence structures.","removable_sets":[3495510],"can_remove":1,"id":8827634,"symbol":"Vary sentence structures"},{"id":8827641,"symbol":"Vary vocabulary","removable_sets":[3495510],"description":"Use a stronger verb, phrase, or transition to explain your evidence. Common phrases (like \"The text says\" or \"For example\") are helpful, but try to introduce evidence in different ways each time.","can_remove":1,"owner":1046173113,"locked_sets":[],"hidden":0}]}